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Cable x Deadpool

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[Apr. 17th, 2006|02:54 pm]
Cable x Deadpool


[Current Location |Australia]
[music |Eyeshield 21]

Title: Suggestions welcome, originally titled "Comment Fic Time"
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I don't own anything.

This is a commentfic I wrote over in dizzycadence's journal, so uh enjoy?

Wade felt Nate’s fingers ghosting along his scars, tracing out patterns that no else took the time to see. But Nate did, and at the same time Wade could smell Nate; the combination of his breath, his cologne, his shampoo, his sweat, everything that put together was Nate. Including the coconut body lotion that Wade had given him, for no reason; just he thought he’d like it was all. No one noticed when that became part of what Nate smelt like. No one, but Wade that is.

Nate still hurt when he used the Dominus Objective, he hurt everytime, he just hid it. No one knew, no one even suspected, except Wade of course. Wade knew exactly what it felt like, Black Box had made sure of that. The way it felt to see Wade curled into a foetal position, the pain too much to even scream, that stayed with him. So did Wade, even after that.

Sometimes in the dead of night Wade would bolt straight up from sleep, his reassembled mind deciding that right then was a great time to attack him with the memory of something a healthy person would have repressed, things that his formerly fragmented mind hid from him. Nate knew though, he knew all Wade’s secrets. And Wade knew a few of his. Things he wished he didn’t, if only because it wasn’t always a memory that woke him. Sometimes it was the possibility, the possibility that he might let him down, that someone could make him slip up.

Nate even knew that. There was something Wade had been sure that Nate didn’t know, that he couldn’t know. There was something that Nate knew, that he knew that Wade knew. If Nate hadn’t done such a good job gluing it back together it would have blown Wade’s mind when Nate kissed him for the first time.


[User Picture]From: violent_rabbit
2006-04-17 09:21 am (UTC)
Weee! I love the last line. - Im am liking the stream of conciouness trype of thing, and Wade's sight insecturity. :D
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2006-04-17 10:34 am (UTC)
Thanks. Last line is my favourite too.
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[User Picture]From: zara_the_pirate
2006-04-17 01:14 pm (UTC)
Huzzah, now I have to make more art.
And chew the ears off a chocolate bunny.
But mostly doing the art thing.
Loved the scatterminded-ness of it all.
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2006-04-17 01:20 pm (UTC)
Indeed you do, and send it to me :D

I already chewed the ears off my bunny, but will you yell at yours after you eat the ears? No matter how loud you yell it won't hear you.

Thanks I wrote that like in I think under ten minutes as comment fic for dizzy
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[User Picture]From: zara_the_pirate
2006-04-17 01:27 pm (UTC)
I will!

Nah, I just snapped off the ears and overacted on the chewing towards my sister as she cooed about how cute the bunnies were and that she couldn't eat them.
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2006-04-17 01:29 pm (UTC)

Remind her that the chocolate bunny life cycle is short and full of tradgey. Does she really want to see it live past its prime, where its body is breaking down around it. Or should she give it a blazing moment of glory rather then a lingering death?
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[User Picture]From: kirke_novak
2006-10-28 07:15 pm (UTC)
I did not comment on that yet? How come?! I've read it 5 times, loving it more with every time!
Because yes, I really really really &hearts' it! I love good angst and Wade!angst is the best, especially with an ending like that :D Bravo!
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2006-10-29 10:25 am (UTC)
I did not comment on that yet?
Apparently not until now

I've read it 5 times, loving it more with every time!
5 times? That's like a a really cool, thanks :D

Because yes, I really really really ♥' it! I love good angst and Wade!angst is the best, especially with an ending like that :D Bravo!
*Glee* :D
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2006-10-29 10:28 am (UTC)
oooh gotta stop being distracted by things when I'm typing, random missing words appear, like "that's a ... a really cool compliment"
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From: apogo305
2009-02-28 12:42 pm (UTC)
Hello,I just came across with this fic,and I really love the angst and the great ending.It's short but perfect.
Would you mind if I translate it into Chinese?
I would love to let my friends see it.
If you agree I'll give you credit and a link of the translation.
Anyway, thank you and your wonderful work.
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2009-03-01 01:20 am (UTC)
Thanks, feel free to translate it
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From: apogo305
2009-03-02 09:39 am (UTC)
Thank you, here is the link to my translation.
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[User Picture]From: hohaiyee
2009-06-01 06:17 pm (UTC)

re: comment fic

It's always amazing how sweetly adorable Deadpool is...considering the whole scary scarred assassin thing. You just want to wrap him up in a blanket and feed him soup.

How about the title, "Somebody Notices"? Or is that too obvious...?
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2009-11-24 01:11 pm (UTC)

Re: comment fic

"Somebody Notices" it is :)
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[User Picture]From: prue84
2009-11-24 01:26 am (UTC)
I'm another one of those in love with the last line, indeed! **
This is such a wonderful little piece!
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[User Picture]From: navisx
2009-11-24 01:10 pm (UTC)
Thanks, always a little ego-boost to get a review - though does make me want to reread all of C&D again so I can fic properly when I get some free time.
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[User Picture]From: prue84
2009-11-24 05:47 pm (UTC)
The series is indeed a drug, you may feel the urge to read it whenever you stumble upon something that reminds you them. I can have this urge even when I hear or read somewhere a "shut up!" or Demi Moore name! ^^"
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