|comment fic; Quick Fantasty (Cable/Deadpool, Black Mamba episode)
||[Jul. 19th, 2009|02:57 pm]
Cable x Deadpool
from the marvel kink meme
Cable/Deadpool - what Black Mamba made Cable fantasize about. Include careless or rough sex.
He writhed beneath your weight, twisting and thrashing as you slam him into the mattress with each hard thrust, because he could take it, because he will heal. You mark him anyways, sucking hungrily at the hollowing base of his throat, right after you've buried yourself deep to the sound of his sharp whining wail.
It's music, he's your instrument of smokey harmonics and you will play him until your name is all he knows to sing at the end of the night. All that he knows all that he thinks and all he could say in the end would be your name, yours.
But when you kiss him gently in the aftermath, and he purrs happily around your fingers, the dream breaks and you are but yet another man left feeling exposed and bereft.
Nnngh. So hot. Poor guys, that fantasy was such a tease for them. I love that Cable's fantasy was more explicit than Deadpool's.
Nate is older, har har har.
2009-07-19 10:03 pm (UTC)
is it really weird i'm sitting here going "oooh, this is a PERFECT example of a well executed 2nd POV"? yeah, i'm an english major...part of me wants to print this out and hand it into class to make them read it~ XD
This is also very nice and very hot~~
2009-07-19 10:17 pm (UTC)
I remember the sporking of 2nd POV a few years back
Thanks to the flood of YOU fics where the reader is the Mary Sue, in the Naruto fandom...
...but I really like playing with 2nd POV, it delivers emotional punches very well. There was a very good Yu-Gi-Oh fic on FF.Net (If it's still there) titled Silence, told through the POV of a nurse who repeatedly treated Seto Kaiba since he was little, being paid hush money not to ask questions about the disturbing bruises.
2nd POV is also excellent in short slash fics, since in slash fics, we don't get to use he and she to distinguish the two characters. Ditto for short emotional pieces involving two characters of the same sex in general...
Thank you again for filling this prompt. <333
That be the hottest short fic I have ever read.
Black Mamba's powers are cruel like that, giving a taste of something forbidden only to fade away, still wanting more.
2009-07-22 07:18 pm (UTC)
I bet it so totally affect everyone differently
Like, Deadpool has a good time of it, but someone like Cable, who must want a lot of stuff he's not suppose to have because Messiahs Don't Have Selfish Wants, yeah, it's going to burn.
Man, I'm so swamped right now. But THIS!!!!
How can something so short be so perfect. Strip away that calm facade and the civility and this is IS Nate, that violent, frightening man Ozy. was describing in the Blood of the Apocalypse.
On the one hand, you could say that Black Mamba's power is cruel because it shows what you want deeply but don''t have. But I see her powerful as more frightening because she let you experience your deepest desire, and some people, those who wants it bad enough, will be willing take it by force or otherwise. And yeah, I definitely see Nate as someone who will do something about it ;D
will be willing take it by force or otherwise
Let's see, in CANON, Cable made Deadpool see the ghosts of people he has killed, hoping that it will break him enough that he'll go crawling to Cable for help, not how he described it, but that's mindrape.
A perfect flash fic: wonderful *_*